tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post1695804441937873782..comments2024-03-14T19:47:17.502-04:00Comments on Unwritten: MFF Entry #1: Say Goodbye by Tara Fox HallMystihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-85372883109048222142012-05-28T18:46:01.660-04:002012-05-28T18:46:01.660-04:00I enjoyed your story, Tara. Poison berries, a uniq...I enjoyed your story, Tara. Poison berries, a unique idea, and a slow, painful death I'd think.Leona~Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07402887334910900186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-26542889577025863162012-05-09T09:59:22.547-04:002012-05-09T09:59:22.547-04:00Loved your story, Tor :)Loved your story, Tor :)Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-36438980576633165892012-05-06T21:57:55.232-04:002012-05-06T21:57:55.232-04:00Wow! Was that ever powerful! Mama Bear, I salute...Wow! Was that ever powerful! Mama Bear, I salute you! And hooray for the hero ranger! Now I'm inspired to try my own, definitely…<br /><br />Love and hugs,<br />TorTori L. Ridgewoodhttp://torilridgewood.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-16182890757017329752012-05-06T16:15:52.579-04:002012-05-06T16:15:52.579-04:00Good to meet you, Nurse Artist :) Glad you liked t...Good to meet you, Nurse Artist :) Glad you liked the story. Art punched Kirk, hurting his hand in the process and knocking the vengeful dad out cold.Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-37234225721605704902012-05-06T16:13:17.492-04:002012-05-06T16:13:17.492-04:00Glad you liked it! :)Glad you liked it! :)Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-14601066317938923072012-05-06T13:07:18.097-04:002012-05-06T13:07:18.097-04:00Good story Tara!..you start out slow, but the susp...Good story Tara!..you start out slow, but the suspense builds steadily and rapidly. At the end, I wasn't sure if someone had been shot or what had happened. I was greatly relieved to read that Kirk was going to get what he deserved..or at least that's what we are led to assume. Great story.NurseArtisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13722433622899562506noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-34389761703242693132012-05-06T10:50:28.535-04:002012-05-06T10:50:28.535-04:00You're welcome! I love finding pics to illustr...You're welcome! I love finding pics to illustrate!Mystihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-37629357753838477142012-05-05T19:24:48.840-04:002012-05-05T19:24:48.840-04:00Ohhhh..so scarey. I liked it lots!Ohhhh..so scarey. I liked it lots!Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05738296455389508643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-72021324421748603602012-05-05T19:14:43.532-04:002012-05-05T19:14:43.532-04:00Hi Rebecca! :) Very glad you liked the story...as ...Hi Rebecca! :) Very glad you liked the story...as it was the only idea I had! :) thanks for commenting.Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-13071833730788272392012-05-05T19:12:55.885-04:002012-05-05T19:12:55.885-04:00I learned a new word! :)
fris·son/frēˈsôN/
Noun:...I learned a new word! :) <br /><br />fris·son/frēˈsôN/<br />Noun: <br />A sudden strong feeling of excitement or fear; a thrill: "a frisson of excitement".<br /><br />Am very glad I could give you a frisson, Mrs. T! And thank you for expanding my vocabulary :)Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-90668097497682939652012-05-05T17:01:16.079-04:002012-05-05T17:01:16.079-04:00Great story, Tara! Loved the suspense! Now, I just...Great story, Tara! Loved the suspense! Now, I just have to write mine... after I come up with a good idea, of course. ;)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06110416365077058895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-52400476876982990692012-05-05T16:58:20.118-04:002012-05-05T16:58:20.118-04:00Nice one Tara. Gave me a frisson! Very nice!Nice one Tara. Gave me a frisson! Very nice!Jenny Twisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15716569675973035423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-4788405043616096582012-05-05T14:16:42.816-04:002012-05-05T14:16:42.816-04:00Thank you for posting my story, Mysti :) The night...Thank you for posting my story, Mysti :) The nightshade berry pic is an awesome touch. Just what I was thinking when I wrote the story :)Tara Fox Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01754949710437719259noreply@blogger.com