tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post417186171406683844..comments2024-03-14T19:47:17.502-04:00Comments on Unwritten: Call Me MAYbe Flash Fiction #3: Talk Normal by Mickey J CorriganMystihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-86308667376710832662013-05-08T15:49:37.151-04:002013-05-08T15:49:37.151-04:00"Our eyes locked, held. His eyes were black a..."Our eyes locked, held. His eyes were black and deep. I could see a glimmer there, a tiny fire that would, I was sure, light me up inside if I let it.<br /><br />Well does she, "let it?" <br />Or do I have to wait and read about it in the next episode. <br />Great ending to hook me in.Codependency Caring or Controllinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14335694583099675558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-40701389410920805732013-05-04T08:30:34.920-04:002013-05-04T08:30:34.920-04:00Pencil thin egos. Nice.Pencil thin egos. Nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-39984199716425444032013-05-04T00:05:54.377-04:002013-05-04T00:05:54.377-04:00I really liked this. The tension was tight and ni...I really liked this. The tension was tight and nicely controlled, kept me reading. I loved the twist at the end. Nice Flash! :) Vonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13999742509672983958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-61965447878180444342013-05-04T00:02:29.847-04:002013-05-04T00:02:29.847-04:00Love how you turned things around at the endLove how you turned things around at the endAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-82440846919662983722013-05-04T00:01:11.133-04:002013-05-04T00:01:11.133-04:00Good work, loved how things did a complete 180.Good work, loved how things did a complete 180.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-87030695222697194062013-05-03T17:24:55.780-04:002013-05-03T17:24:55.780-04:00Great job, Mickey :) I liked this piece and am gla...Great job, Mickey :) I liked this piece and am glad the girl got control of the situation in the end ;) Happy writing!Leilanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-73494521004317035672013-05-03T16:59:37.977-04:002013-05-03T16:59:37.977-04:00LOL. That was excellent. Had me laughing at the en...LOL. That was excellent. Had me laughing at the end. I love tough women. All I could think was, turnabout is fair play. sherry fundinhttp://www.fundinmental.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-42239600898859376782013-05-03T09:50:17.002-04:002013-05-03T09:50:17.002-04:00How terrible of you to stereotype men like that, M...How terrible of you to stereotype men like that, Mickey. ;) Really well done!Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00570956965314483316noreply@blogger.com