tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post5858203398917251446..comments2024-03-14T19:47:17.502-04:00Comments on Unwritten: Shameless Self Promotion DayMystihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-55651287416780231162011-06-29T19:12:02.604-04:002011-06-29T19:12:02.604-04:00Thanks for the feedback Louis. Still trying to fig...Thanks for the feedback Louis. Still trying to figure out what works and what doesn't in every aspect of the game :) <br /><br />Yeah, I hate typos--I think it got smooshed together when I copy/pasted. Thanks for pointing those out.Mystihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-46993797290734709942011-06-29T18:06:05.306-04:002011-06-29T18:06:05.306-04:00Love it - great job. Clearly stated. I'm not b...Love it - great job. Clearly stated. I'm not bogged down with superfluous names and detail. I get the story and I like it.<br /><br />Because I'm haunted by typos, in the opening - authorof (need a space), toleave (ditto), morethan (ditto)<br /><br />"Through it all, they discover the power of forgiveness and of a love that stands the test of time."<br /><br />I was thinking (always a dangerous thing) you might want to up the ante a bit with something like "Through it all, they struggle to find the power of forgiveness and of a love that stands the test of time."<br /><br />But really, it's a nice promo.Louis K. Lowyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141327449064325188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-77703304780054716022011-06-29T18:00:07.896-04:002011-06-29T18:00:07.896-04:00This comment has been removed by the author.Louis K. Lowyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02141327449064325188noreply@blogger.com