tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post8709689430925226436..comments2024-03-14T19:47:17.502-04:00Comments on Unwritten: Call Me MAYbe Flash Fiction #14: All That Glitters by Alayna-Renee Vilmont Mystihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02147640629724678243noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-29098885584248025362013-05-22T12:41:39.633-04:002013-05-22T12:41:39.633-04:00Very good. Reminds me of the old Twilight Zone sh...Very good. Reminds me of the old Twilight Zone shows where the character's flaws lead to their downfall. Did the wife's insecurity lead her cut the brake lines or did the husband's desire to keep his daughter a secret lead him to drive too fast?Williamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07094184762539430580noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-44481634987641889332013-05-21T18:46:06.142-04:002013-05-21T18:46:06.142-04:00Very clever.Very clever.M.C.V. EGANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06575143818423442046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-22598666507062846692013-05-20T17:40:24.003-04:002013-05-20T17:40:24.003-04:00Great story, Alayna, and like the others, I loved ...Great story, Alayna, and like the others, I loved the surprise ending. Your story was very well written and a lesson in not to expect an expected ending.(did that make sense)<br />Leona~Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07402887334910900186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-85014056089825416832013-05-20T12:30:39.359-04:002013-05-20T12:30:39.359-04:00Thank you so much for your words of support, ladie...Thank you so much for your words of support, ladies! Much appreciated. :) And thank you to Mysti for hosting this feature...these prompts are wonderful ways to get creativity moving around. <br /><br />Leila, you're definitely correct. I purposely left it ambiguous, so that it is up to the reader to ultimately figure out Isabelle and her role in how the story ends. Since we only know the story from her point of view, the reader gets to judge her a bit in terms of "What did she know?" <br /><br />*Hugs*,<br />*~ A. Alayna-Renee Vilmonthttp://www.jadedelegance.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-27855450624691285882013-05-20T11:58:10.147-04:002013-05-20T11:58:10.147-04:00Wow, great story, Alayna!Wow, great story, Alayna!Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00570956965314483316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-82973418417407034892013-05-20T10:38:13.284-04:002013-05-20T10:38:13.284-04:00What an absorbing, well-written story! The end was...What an absorbing, well-written story! The end was startling indeed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14125158364177051304noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5190451394398154097.post-87049112108197249632013-05-20T09:50:17.974-04:002013-05-20T09:50:17.974-04:00Great story Alayna! It was an ending I wasn't...Great story Alayna! It was an ending I wasn't expecting even though it seemed that Isabelle knew a bit more than than was let on by you...she did not seem too shocked to find the girl on her step. Hopefully there was no misunderstanding on my part. Wonderful job on this and happy writing to you!Leilanoreply@blogger.com