by
Nimal Eshwar
Dr. Bishop sat on his couch sipping coffee,
thinking about the recent brutal murder of his team member. They’d been part of
Central Genetics Organization’s
Special Research Operation. He was punished barbarically, till death. The image
of it made him shiver. The murderer, named Slain, had a message for Dr. Bishop
“I will Find you” written in blood.
He couldn’t oppose the trueness of that message; somehow Slain is going to find
him. He tried to stay positive as much as possible. But at times like this, he
couldn’t help himself. He knew he won’t stand a chance facing a savage evil.

After fixing the electric switch, he came back to check the lights. The
lights were fixed perfectly. With satisfaction of the work he turned towards the
couch. The door was ajar “I did lock the
door, weird”. He heard the same screeching noise from the hallway. Horror struck him like a lonely locomotive.
He yelled in a shaky tone “Who’s there?”
There was no response but the screeching became audible. A black hooded
silhouette came through the hallway with footsteps as calm as the dead. Like a
child’s painting, the loosely flowing robes smeared the floor with blood that
oozed from its body. It held a long shiny sword that dug through the wall as it
glided. “It’s Slain,” Bishop fell on
his knees, unable to think of the evil he had to encounter. He slowly crawled
behind the couch. The Crimson Red eyes of Slain searched for its prey keenly.
Bishop’s body started to tremble. He covered his mouth to deaden his echoing
exhalations and continued to crawl towards the drawing room as the stair case
barricaded Slain’s view.
A raspy voice questioned him “How are you doctor? Remember Me?”
Slain jumped from the staircase and stood before him. Dumbstruck, he
looked up to witness the monster up close in person. Slain licked the swords
with an evil laugh that rang through the house. Bishop jerked to his feet and ran
towards the kitchen. He panted and switched off the lights. He took a knife
from the tray and stood behind the door. But fear dominated his anxiety to know
the reason behind Slain’s hunting. He was drenched with sweat. A shadow
approaching the door halted his breathing. Slain cut through the door and guided
his head through the hole.
The fleshy face was covered with black mask, but there was blood oozing
all around its mask.
“Gotcha Doctor”, his shouting
sprayed blood on his face
“Eat this”, with a loud shout Bishop pierced the knife into Slain’s
head. But to his horror it didn’t pierce its head. With a heavy push Slain
tried to open to door, in that fraction of moment Bishop tried to veer towards
the cupboard. But the sheer power of Slain rammed him to the floor.
Slain walked towards him slowly, like a beast stalking its prey
“What… What do you want from me?”
“It’s you doctor, you of all men, YOU”
Bishop moaned in pain as Slain drove the sword into his right ankle.
“Why… Why, why are you doing
this?” yelled bishop in unbearable pain
“GOD” shouted Slain. He was stunned to hear that word. It still hung in
front of his face.
“Inveraity? You aren’t dead?” exclaimed Bishop raising his head
“No, you maggot, but I’m dying everyday”
Slain kicked his chest and the power of his blow bounced his head on the
floor. Bishop felt dizzy and bleeding from his head.
“I don’t go by that name, I Call myself SLAIN”

Slain pulled the sword from Bishop’s ankle. Bishop groaned in pain,
Slain positioned him on his knees.
His heart sank in fear at the thought of Slain’s previous murders. I don’t wanna die.
“I had Family, Friends and Life. You ruined all that” whispered Slain at
his face
He placed the blade in his neck and cut him fiercely “No one plays GOD
except GOD himself”
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My name is Nimal and I’m a budding writer. I am 27 years old. I like to read and write. This is my first competition. Dramas are my go-to writing. But this is my first time experience on horror writing. Hope this one goes well.
Great job on this Nimal :) The story was nicely paced and filled with rich details which left me hanging on until the end. Nicely done and happy writing to you!
ReplyDeleteThanks Leila for your comments. Wonderful to hear from you.
Deletenimal
Hats off to you budding writer, but this one doesn't look like as if this is your first horror writing ;)
ReplyDeletegood one nimal!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks guys,
ReplyDeleteI have to credit my friend (esther sunita: G+) for helping me out in editing and reviewing this story. She has put her valuable time in doing that. Thanks to my "In-House Editor" as she likes to be called ;)
Nimal
Thanks! And any amount of editing wouldn't have done any good if it wasn't for the creator.... Like putting make-up on...
DeleteWow good...
ReplyDeleteGood job, great imagination. Scary!
ReplyDeleteIt was like watching some science fiction horror movie Nimal..great work..looking forward to read more of your writings..all the best.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt was like watching some science fiction horror movie Nimal..great work..looking forward to read more of your writings..all the best.. :)
ReplyDeleteIt was like watching some science fiction horror movie Nimal..great work..looking forward to read more of your writings..all the best.. :)
ReplyDeleteIts Great.. :)
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