Tuesday, October 1, 2013

How My Writing Has Evolved: A Guest Post & Giveaway by Author Mathew Bridle




 Young Warlock

 by
 Mathew Bridle

Genre: YA Fantasy

Publisher: Independently Published

Formats Available In: All eBook formats and Print

Release Date: 27th September 2013

 Compelled by his lust for the flame the young warlock is driven on a trail of destruction. Running from those he once trusted, he befriends a tattlejack, Icthus, whose gift of extracting the truth could become his greatest strength. Now all he needs to do is defeat his lust and prove his worth to all those who doubt him, including the young girl who is carrying his child. Only the old priest believes the boy, Dekor, to be something more than just another warlock.

The dogs of war are gathering. The undead seek allies among the enemy horde in the north in their bid to rout the mages, break the control of the Council of Twelve and take the land for themselves. Together the goblins and the undead set out to scourge the lands of Alzear of all who stand in their way.

The pieces of the prophecy are slowly cohering. The gods have chosen their warriors and the people have chosen their gods. War is coming, a war whose like we have never seen. The fate of an entire people may rest in the hands of a headstrong young man and his unborn child.

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How My Writing Has Evolved
by
Mathew Bridle




As this is part of a blog tour I have to be careful not to repeat myself. I could have been lazy and sent out something I've already done. I recently wrote a piece on my own site about how my writing has evolved over the years, especially in recent years. There are now a great many sites out there offering good advice on how to write a bestseller. I'd love to write the next big thing, the new Harry Potter, or Lord of the Rings. It is possible that I have done just that! But I

lack the marketing knowledge and the money to push my book. I'm even getting good reviews now. But it took me a long time to sculpt my style and find my real story telling voice.






So, did I change anything? Yeah, a lot, but mostly speed. I used to
write at a furious pace. I once wrote 50, 000 words in a week. I was
excited. I was actually writing a book, The Rising. I love 1980's
horror, the Wes Craven, John Carpenter type. Christine is an all-time
favourite. The Rising can only be described as a mess. I did my best
for a boy with an E in his O level English. I had no idea what a run
on sentence was. I got basic things wrong, still do sometimes. I never
went back over my work. I knew that it was what it was. I knew nothing
about plotting, even mentally. I just wrote because at last I found
something I could do.



Today all that excitement is as strong as ever. Sometimes nothing but
writing matters, I must write or just get angry, like an addict
needing a hit. So now, if I write a 1000 words in a sitting I am
amazed. But every one of those words will have been pondered over.
Sure, when the excitement takes me I'll hammer out the story. Then,
when the chapter is finished I will separate it from the novel and
analyse it. I will sit like a sculptor and see the story within the
words. Then I'll knock pieces out, shape others and drop hints to past
and the future. I'll weave tiny threads together which I'll leave
hanging in the breeze for another day: it's a saga after all. Why
rush? When the whole book is done I'll take a break, play some games
with the kids and shunt the storytelling into a corner. Then, I'll
pick up the manuscript, take up my quill and add some style and some
tiny stitches which have waited for the whole story to be 'finished'.
Now that I'm happy with it I can send it across the sea to my editor.
Never under estimate the power of an expert. A real editor will help
tighten those stitches and point out where dropped one.



All the best, Mysti. Thanks for having me.




Mathew Bridle (born 1963) heralds from the south of England where he lives with his wife of 17 years and his three house monkeys (children). He began writing novels in the late 1990's with The Rising, an 80's style horror novel. A second novel quickly followed, 3 Phaze, a science fiction story set in the last days of the Earth. His third, Lagoon, inspired by the X-files is a sci-fi horror, brutal and sexual.

Nowadays he spends his time writing fantasy with Young Warlock as the first full instalment of this epic saga. When not writing he likes to relax with his Kindle, most likely reading either a classic fantasy or something from a new indie author. Either that or wrestling the controls for the Xbox from one of children.






Sunday, September 29, 2013

Authors Beware!

This article on STGRB is very telling in showing exactly how the bully mentality on Goodreads has worked. This "reviewer" claims to love authors in comments on another website, yet spent the day yesterday randomly "carpet bombing" 100 books on Goodreads with 1-star reviews. How can one claim to respect authors, then go round deliberately leaving low ratings on books they've never read? I'm glad the problem is being addressed, but authors, be wary. Keep your interactions minimal on these sites or you'll be sucked into ridiculous drama.


READ IT HERE: http://www.stopthegrbullies.com/2013/09/29/carpet-bomber-2-barbara-andrew-loves-me/

Authors, don't be surprised if random 1-star ratings appear on your books, especially on Goodreads. If they do, flag it or report it, but do NOT, by any means, interact with the "reviewer".

If you notice malicious activity on any of your book ratings, record the information or take screenshots. And here are a couple of links you can use to file your complaints:

Goodreads

Amazon (also, you can email Jeff Bezos, CEO: jeff@amazon.com & Nader Kabbani, VP of KDP: nader@amazon.com)

The only way we can ensure a positive change in this situation is to be proactive. This IS our business, no matter if it's our main source of income or not, and we need to do all we can to maintain our integrity. This also applies to the fake glowing reviews. Ask everyone who reviews your books to leave an HONEST review. This means they may not like everything about it, and they may not leave you a 5-star review, and that's OK. It's honest, and that's what you need to strive for.

DO NOT, and I repeat DO NOT respond negatively to a critical review! Drown your sorrows in chocolate or cry into your pillow or indulge in some retail therapy, but do NOT engage with critics. Especially the harsh ones. Unless you know this person, there's a chance it's a dreaded "troll" who is just waiting for you to complain so they can launch their counterattack and spread venom about you to everyone who will listen.

 Readers (the REAL ones) will respect you all the more if you are open and respectful in all you do. And that's my public service message for today.

Mysti out.

Saturday, September 28, 2013

Coming October 2: A Guest Post by Chrystalla Thoma, author of Azure

Join us here on October 2 for a special guest post by author Chrystalla Thoma, as part of her virtual book tour for her latest release, a New Adult novel called Azure!


Here's the rest of the schedule if you'd like to be Chrystalla's groupie:

30th September - Guest Post - Page Turner Book Tours   
30th September - Spotlight - Love Books? Blog Books! -http://www.lovebooksblogbooks.blogspot.co.uk/           

1st October - Guest Post - Inkfever - http://www.amylaurens.com/
1st October- Interview - Charles O'Keefe  - http://p45crok.wordpress.com/

2nd October - Guest Post - Unwritten - http://www.mystiparker.blogspot.com/

3rd October - Spotlight  - The Writer's Life - http://thewriterslife.blogspot.co.uk/  

4th October - Review - Pure Jonel - http://purejonel.blogspot.ca/

7th October - Guest Post - The Council Blog - http://jscouncil.com/site/the-council-blog/

8th October - Guest Post - My World - http://stephsgrn.blogspot.co.uk/

9th October - Spotlight - Reading Writing And More - http://stephsgrn.wordpress.com/
9th October - The Book Junkie - http://thereaderhaven.wordpress.com/

10th October - Guest Post - IWAssociation - http://iwassociation.com/      

11th October - Review - Read 2 Review - http://read2review.com 
11th October - Interview - J.A. Beard's Unnecessary Musing - http://riftwatcher.blogspot.com/

Friday, September 27, 2013

What Good Is a Review?

Back in July, I did a guest post on Tricia Kristufek's "Musings of a Writing Reader" with some pointers about writing book reviews (scroll down a bit on that post to read it).

 Unfortunately, nowadays, it's hard to tell if a review for a product or book is even legit.



This  Goodreads "Civil Protest" = Untrustworthy Ratings
With so many bullies randomly one-starring things because of some perceived offense or out of protest, AND with all the fake glowing reviews that companies (and authors) often pay for, how can we tell if what we're buying lives up to the hype (or the bashing)?

This deceptive behavior lowers the value of people like me who actually take the time to write genuine, HONEST reviews of books and products. As unfortunate as this is, we have to realize that we CANNOT rely on customer reviews alone to help us make a purchase decision.

Here are some things you can look for when deciding what to buy and what to ignore:

  1. Try It Before You Buy It: When shopping for a book online, use the "look inside" or "preview" options to read a bit of the book before you buy. Or, in the case of Kindle books, often you can download a preview straight to your Kindle device. No matter how good or bad the reviews, you should be able to tell if you enjoy the writing and story from this preview.
  2. Word of Mouth: Ask friends and family who have bought the product or used the service, or seek out sources who are knowledgeable about what you're buying. For instance, if you're shopping for a contractor to renovate your home, try to go straight to those with whom he/she's worked before.
  3. If It Quacks Like a Duck: Sometimes you CAN tell the difference between real and fake reviews. Starred ratings with no review whatsoever you should ignore since there is no information backing the rating. Reviews that are 100% glowing with praise and catch phrases such as "must-read" or "must-have", those you should probably ignore too. The most trustworthy reviews are those that aren't 100% positive or negative. Look for reviews that express both pros and cons of a product. That way, you're getting a well-rounded view. 
Just for an example of a well-written critical review, here's one from one of MY books, Hearts In Exile:

 
by 

8492956
's review
Jun 03, 13

bookshelves: fantasy, new-adult-adult, read-2013
Read on May 26, 2013

Actual Rating 2.5 

First of all before saying anything else, I’d like to say that this book isn’t a fantasy but more of a romance, of course it’s set in a fantastical world but it doesn’t focus on it so I think I am going to call it a romance instead.

This book didn’t do much for me to be honest. It’s because I don’t usually like books that are focused on a romance instead of, for example, the world that this book is set in. As it is, there isn’t much going on besides the romance. This book starts with the main character being exiled to some island and then after 10 years, her lover comes up. Then the book goes back in time to the first time they met and then it moves forward until it comes to the present.

It was hard for me to enjoy even that because I was waiting for the story to continue in the present but the majority of the book is set in the past. I think there wasn’t enough time spent in the present to satisfy me.
The characters however were pretty good. Loralee is the daughter of a priestess and will eventually have to marry someone chosen by the king and her mother. She is determined and believes in change. I like how she is willing to stand up for what she believes instead of standing at the sidelines waiting for change to happen. Although she can be a bit naïve when it comes to her sister, she cannot see through the lies her sister tells and falls for them even when her sister is hostile to her.

There are two sisters, the youngest one is rather adorable and the second youngest one, well as I’ve said, is fishy and selfish and… a whole bunch of other things.

Igrorio had an okay childhood until his mother died and his father became depressed and then his father died and said some things right before that happened. Igorio of course dismisses what his father said because denial is better isn’t it? Aside from that, Igrorio is loyal to the bone and cares deeply for his friends and Loralee.

I am the kind of person who doesn’t find it believable when teenagers go around claiming they are in love, that is not to say that there aren’t cases where I am absolutely convinced, but in this case I am glad that the romance takes time to be developed even though they’ve had feelings for each other since almost the first time they met.

Her dad is the ‘good’ parent while her mom is horrible. Her mom, it seems, is jealous and upset because she claims her husband doesn’t love her but loves her sister who died. I don’t understand why she takes that out on her older daughter. They are always clashing heads and can never agree on anything. It bugs me when parents treat their children like that.

The ending wasn’t particularly satisfying either. It wasn’t how I wanted things to work out, it ends in the present of course but because there wasn’t exactly a conflict in the present, the ending just didn’t work for me and what happened right in the end? Well it left me slightly confused.

If you enjoy a romance, then give this a shot.

This review has also been posted on my blog
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You can see from reading that it's a well-rounded description of the reader's experience. It's more than just "I didn't like this book." It's full of specific details about the characters and storyline, which would be hard to do if the reader hadn't actually READ the book. 

Sure, I wish this reader had enjoyed the book more, but I am SOOO appreciative of reviews like this. These are the sort that actually help inform consumers. 

So, our lesson today is buyers beware. Learn to sort truth from fiction by not relying solely on reviews, but get the best bang for your buck by using your good common sense and doing a little research. 

~Mysti

Thursday, September 26, 2013

Spare the Rod, Spoil the Child

Over the past week, I've watched the train wreck which has unfolded concerning Goodreads' review and bookshelf policy changes. In case you haven't been privy to the drama, here's the announcement thread and the over 3000 comments it's generated since last Friday.

http://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/1499741-important-note-regarding-reviews

Most of the comments express a sincere hatred of the changes. Lots of flowery language too. I can almost hear the BLEEPs as I read them. Cries of "censorship" and "thought police" are everywhere. If you explore some of the other sites covering it, like STGRB and even some major news sites like the Washington Post,
it's hard to know who's really to blame for the whole blow-up. It's like a vicious troll vs. troll battle:


"Authors are the real trolls!"
 "Nuh-uh, it's reviewers who are the trolls!"
I mean, WTH, seriously? Is this what the publishing industry has become? I can only address this from my experience as a mother. Here's the deal: Goodreads started out as a first-time mom with some grand intentions. She developed a nice list of rules and guidelines for all her children to follow. Yet, like many mothers, she didn't follow through with the discipline. You see, kids will be kids and they will constantly test their boundaries. Unless mom is consistent with enforcing the rules and using tactful discipline, the kids will over-step one boundary after another. And if mom keeps caving to the kids unruly behavior, they'll keep overstepping until they become absolute spoiled brats.

That's what's happened to Goodreads. They had a reasonable set of guidelines that should have kept discussions civil and squashed drama before it escalated, but from the start, they didn't enforce the rules. Now, all of a sudden Mama Goodreads has had enough of the brats and is putting her foot down. And the kids are NOT happy at all.

Is it any wonder? The lesson I hope other book-centered websites will take away from this is: if your goal is to foster a welcoming, civil interaction of your users, then you HAVE to be a disciplinarian from the very start. Hire some good moderators. If someone breaks the rules, give them one warning, and if they ignore it, put them in time out. Let them come back after a while, but if they offend once more, then take away their toys (membership).

I hate that this big Goodreads hoopla has resorted to what looks like censorship, but since there are kids out there who refuse to be respectful and use their common sense, it's become a necessary evil. Spare the rod, spoil the child. Refuse to moderate your website, you're gonna get trolls. Plain and simple.

Wednesday, September 25, 2013

10 Things You Didn't Know About Me and Probably Wish You Didn't

...but I'll tell you anyway!

Yes, dear readers, you can find a whole list of juicy tidbits about me like this one:
"Every time you don't put your shopping cart back in the corral, a kitten dies somewhere in the world. Therefore, I hate you."




To read the rest, you'll have to visit my dear friend, author Jenny Twist's Facebook Fan Page. Just click the linky below and be sure to like Jenny's page. Feel free to comment too, you kitten killers! :)

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Jenny-Twist-Author/291166404240446


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Purchase A Ranger's Tale (Book One) of the Tallenmere fantasy romance series on Kindle or Nook for just $2.99, and get a Kindle or Nook copy of BOTH Serenya's Song (Book 2) & Hearts in Exile (Book 3) FREE! To redeem your free books, just send a copy of purchase receipt to:mystiparker@yahoo.com and I'll send the other books right to your inbox!

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