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Today's post was inspired by an everyday scene of a man carrying a bouquet of flowers. Little things like that can inspire your writing muse if you let them. And, if you can read this flash fiction piece by Deborah Plaugher and not say "Awww" at the end, I will wonder if you've had a lobotomy. Read on!
R is for...The Rose Bouquet
Jeremy left the florist quickly, having no time to spare. His
wife of 10 years awaited him at home, ready to celebrate their anniversary
tonight with a special evening out.
He arrived home at 6 pm, expecting to see Stacey ready and
waiting for him impatiently. Instead, she was just stepping out of the bath;
gratefully, he used this extra time given him to make a special display of the
roses he'd just purchased.
He went searching for the prettiest vase he could find and
proceeded to fill it with water. He removed the wrapping from the bouquet and
arranged them in the vase after cutting off the ends about an inch from the
bottom. He added the special powder that feeds the flowers and keeps them
fresher longer.
Now, he wanted them to be the first thing Stacey saw as she
entered the dining room. He wanted to see her reaction to the roses before she
saw him. He then took his seat on the sofa and nervously waited.
Meanwhile, upstairs in their master bath, Stacey had taken a
long, leisurely, lavender-filled bubble bath and was applying her make-up,
doing her hair and deciding what to wear for this very long-awaited evening
out. She chose Jeremy's favorite, a black to-the-knee dress, open-toed shoes
and a light burgundy shawl.
When Stacey was finally satisfied with how she looked, she
headed out their bedroom door and down the staircase. She wondered if Jeremy
had returned from work yet, as she hadn't heard a sound from downstairs since she'd gotten out of the
bath.
As she reached the bottom of the staircase she noticed the
lights on in the front of the house. “Hmm...he must be home. Why so quiet?” she
mused.
As Stacey crossed the Living Room and approached the door to
the Dining Room, she was still wondering where Jeremy was when she saw it; A
huge bouquet of 2 dozen Roses, beautifully displayed on the kitchen table, with
rose petals strategically placed around the vase with a card leaned up against
it!
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Wife. Mother. Homeschooler.
Notary Public. Bookkeeper. These are just some of the different hats
that Deborah Plaugher has worn through the last 29 years.
Now, she's a budding writer and has also found a love of
Editing of all things. With her 3 children grown, (well, almost, with her
youngest 17 years old and finishing up her junior year in High School), Deborah
is beginning to focus on some of those 'other' things that bring her great joy.
She loves working from her home office, setting her own
schedule and earning income in her own way.
Visit
http://debsedit.com for all your editing needs and to read her blog.
What a lovely story, Deborah. I really enjoyed it!
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Jenny
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Lovely story. Reminds of several anniversaries with my husband. He loves to surprise me with roses and candy "Just Because" and brings them to work to give to me. Then he likes to hear the other girls at work asking if it's our anniversary, my birthday, or "what did he do that he has to make up for?" I've married a true romantic.
ReplyDeleteGlad to know you, Deborah :)Who can resist roses?
ReplyDeleteAh, true love -- this man of your story has enviable connections to his emotional, romantic side. I felt the tension as he waited, her total surprise and the love that radiated between them. Roses and Romance -- good for "R"
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