Don't miss a crazy moment--follow Unwritten today!
"I think we saved each other."
"You're nothing, Renny, nothing!"
Oh wonderful! your ending line sounds amazing! You new line really makes me wonder what happens next! thank you fairy much for participating. happy writing!
The first one intrigued me- the second, broke my heart more than a little...~bru
Hi,1) nice ending line: a happy ending.2) Oh brutal: hope whomever gets due punishment! ;)bestF
Great lines! The first brings a sense of great accomplishment after adventure, the second is so powerfully sad.
Ooo...a happy ending in the last line. I can feel their raw emotion, even though I haven't read the story. The new line has me intrigued!
hiI've popped over from Summer's blogfest!!Your last sentence - yay - all is saved!!your first sentence - gosh such emotion!!! lovely! Take carex
Thanks for posting your first and last sentences. A beautifully romantic ending and such a bitter but sad opening line.
Both are short and sweet. Nice job!
You know how to economize your sentences yet say a lot.Well done on both.Michael
***NOTICE*** Thanks to a spam bot infestation, every comment must now be subjected to a full-body search. If you pass, you can skip the anal probing...maybe.