Wednesday, January 5, 2011

New Creations Blogfest

Check out the "New Creations" blogfest over on "My Inner Fairy".  You're to post a last sentence of a WIP from last year and a first sentence from a WIP from this year. Here are my entries:

From "A Ranger's Tale" (2010):
 "I think we saved each other."
And from "Serenya's Song" (2011):
 "You're nothing, Renny, nothing!"
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9 comments:

  1. Summer RossJanuary 5, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Oh wonderful! your ending line sounds amazing! You new line really makes me wonder what happens next! thank you fairy much for participating. happy writing!

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  2. February GraceJanuary 5, 2011 at 1:04 PM

    The first one intrigued me- the second, broke my heart more than a little...

    ~bru

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  3. Francine HowarthJanuary 5, 2011 at 2:52 PM

    Hi,

    1) nice ending line: a happy ending.

    2) Oh brutal: hope whomever gets due punishment! ;)

    best
    F

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  4. Margo BensonJanuary 5, 2011 at 4:39 PM

    Great lines! The first brings a sense of great accomplishment after adventure, the second is so powerfully sad.

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  5. Ellie GarrattJanuary 5, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    Ooo...a happy ending in the last line. I can feel their raw emotion, even though I haven't read the story. The new line has me intrigued!

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  6. Old KittyJanuary 5, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    hi

    I've popped over from Summer's blogfest!!

    Your last sentence - yay - all is saved!!

    your first sentence - gosh such emotion!!! lovely! Take care
    x

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  7. UnknownJanuary 5, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    Thanks for posting your first and last sentences. A beautifully romantic ending and such a bitter but sad opening line.

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  8. Elena SolodowJanuary 6, 2011 at 9:15 AM

    Both are short and sweet. Nice job!

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  9. Michael Di GesuJanuary 6, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    You know how to economize your sentences yet say a lot.

    Well done on both.

    Michael

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